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@violentdelights it's looking great so far! i just have a couple of things, the app itself is looking a bit bare. Would you mind tagging on a bit to her personality and biography? To that end, there's no 'sign up', it's more like a team clumped together because of varying circumstances and coincidences.
I like that you gave her experience and a touch of the world but I get the feeling that she was too sheltered to ever even meet the group. Even if they're high profile outlaws, they don't walk around in public for no reason, y'know? The group spans globally so they aren't in one place too long (which is my fault for not adding into the intro). For reference, the newbie doesn't necessarily mean new to the lifestyle but more so new to the group, if you could tag on at least a little experience, it'd be appreciated ; u ;
And lastly, would you mind changing the face claim? If you'd like some help, I can send some suggestions
I like that you gave her experience and a touch of the world but I get the feeling that she was too sheltered to ever even meet the group. Even if they're high profile outlaws, they don't walk around in public for no reason, y'know? The group spans globally so they aren't in one place too long (which is my fault for not adding into the intro). For reference, the newbie doesn't necessarily mean new to the lifestyle but more so new to the group, if you could tag on at least a little experience, it'd be appreciated ; u ;
And lastly, would you mind changing the face claim? If you'd like some help, I can send some suggestions
